Describe Your Family Essay

I very much enjoyed your paragraph and the portrait of your family! If you'd like to revise with a focus on only grammatical issues (as opposed to the questions of style and personal taste that mwestwood addresses above), here's where I would start:

There's an article missing in the line "She was a single mom for long time"—the phrase is usually "for a long time." (Articles are tough.)

The sentence "My younger brother is studying...

I very much enjoyed your paragraph and the portrait of your family! If you'd like to revise with a focus on only grammatical issues (as opposed to the questions of style and personal taste that mwestwood addresses above), here's where I would start:

There's an article missing in the line "She was a single mom for long time"—the phrase is usually "for a long time." (Articles are tough.)

The sentence "My younger brother is studying in grade 10 at Overfelt high school" sounds grammatically correct to me, but "studying in grade 10" is a phrase that I've heard less often. The more typical way to express that idea might be: "My younger brother is in 10th grade at Overfelt High School." (Also, in the name of the high school, the words "high school" are usually capitalized—so "I go to high school" is just fine, but if you say "I go to Overfelt High School" it has to be capitalized as part of the name "Overfelt High School.")

"He always walks or takes the bus to school because he doesn't has driver" is really close! "Has" should reflect the auxiliary verb "does" (or here "doesn't") next to it: "He always walks or takes the bus to school because he doesn't have driver." "Driver" also needs an article: "he doesn't have driver."

"He always jokes and tells something funny" is also really close! The only thing is that "tell" usually takes a direct object (meaning you have to tell someone). So how about: "He always jokes and says something funny"? Or maybe "He always jokes and tells me funny things"?

"He is a dynamic and talkative" gives me a great picture of your brother's personality! The only grammar problem here is the article (again, articles are tough). "Dynamic" is an adjective (not a noun) so it doesn't require an article. You can just say, "He is dynamic and talkative."

I understand the phrase "we always spend a good time together" with no problems! I think the more typical phrase, though, is "we always have a good time together."

Those are the only grammatical questions I had! Your family sounds wonderful. Best of luck with your studies!

I hope that these suggestions can help you.

Question 1 : Tell me about your family ?
Answer : Well, first of all , I come from a small family with four members , my parents , my elder brother and me. My father is a supervisor in VN air catering company at the Tan Son Nhat airport and my mother , she is a housewife. ,she also run a small grocery store. my brother is a computer programmer and was three years older than me.

we often gather together to have a happy meal , talk , discussion about our work, our current life and future plans .In fact , my small family always make me feel relaxed and comfortable at the moment.Also, my family is a very happy one.because we love each other and will live together under the same roof forever. By the way ,I don't think your ideas is interesting. Do you believe that you will live in one house forever?

Question 2 : Tell me about your house ?
Answer : My house is in a noisy districtneara large main road . it is small and made of bricks.There are three rooms in my house: the living room,the bedroom and the kitchen. All the rooms are nice and tidy. And the interior decoration and the furniture are beautiful although they aren't expensive.

Question 3 : tell me about your hometown or your city?
Answer : I was born in Ha Nam province , but I grown up in HCM city.I am more comfortable to say that HCM city is my hometown. It's a enormous city , actually one of the biggest cities in Southeast Asia I guess.It's big and has many back alleys in fact that even the locals problems finding their way around. my city offers examples of both classical and contemporary architecture.Actually some of the Vietnam 's most renowned landmarks are "slap-bang" in the middle of HCM city.

Question 4 : Tell me about your study
Answer :Well first of all , I'm a student of the AFTC training center.At this center I study nine disciplines in financial fields such as quantitative, financial reporting analysis, economic, corporate finance .Besides studying at the AFTC training center , I'm attending English course at small English center. I can also add that I'm always on the go.In fact , I have to get to the bottom of problems related to revise schoolwork and become skilled in English.

Question 5 : What makes you happy?
Well first of all , The feeling of pleasure or enjoyment makes me happy. In fact that, most of my family's free time is spent on talkint to each other about our current life, current work and future plans. That was one of the happiest moments of my life. I can also add that it is necessary to do useful sth for my life in order to have true happiness. So actually, when I get a sense of achievement from my work, those everyday actions give me more effort ? , inspiration and happiness.

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